
Re: Kiara Bloodfang's Story
Thanks, misnomer, and I agree. I've had a bit of a rough time in Real life because of worries about my health. I do have a bit of scene planned just have to figure out how to put it. This is a draft and certainly not any where near a finished work.

By the way I am having a hard time editing a longish post. The blasted thing keeps jumping around. Maybe because I have to enlarge it. So if you see any glaring errors feel free to edit them. Even a draft should be as correct as possible.
The basic plot for the rest of the story is this.: She is furious at Caldron but he eventually manages to persuade her to his point of view. Then Tandor returns. I could use some help on what happens between the threesome. Don't want the boys to actually fight or if they start to fight Kiara manages to stop it. Tandor has heard a rumour of a witch down Blackmarsh way who might have a cure and goes off to check on it. Not sure if he should eventually return disconsolate and disappointed because he still hasn't found a cure only to find Kiara involved with Caldron. He could just quietly vanish from the scene or find a warm, friendly maiden in his travels who consoles him.

Eventually our two vampires settle down to live as happily ever after as two people can whether mortal or emortal.